I had attended this writing test in Melbourne, But I am quite sure that the question was clearly asked as an argument essay, and it appeared in different manner than what is posted in this video……..

My score is 7 on 8. Very interesting exercise! Thank you, Ryan

Hi Amit,

The question in this video is also asking the student to write an argument essay. I’m not sure what part of the video made you think otherwise.

Ryan

Hi Ryan,

It was a radical approach to learn, how to develop lexical resources. I found this very interesting.

I got 3 Wrong

Hi Ryan,

Thanks for such good essays.
Such works help a lot.

Sigil.

Hi Ryan,

First of all, thank you for your videos. I found myself addicted to them.

I believe, there was word “commercials” in the question but “advertisements” makes no difference.

I scored 5,5 points in writing task and watching your video with your version of an answer leaves me thinking whether my answer was completely wrong or not. I focused on point of view of an audience and how they may feel about it. I disagreed with the usefulness and as two topics for two supporting paragraphs I chose a bad effect of frequent interruption and a deceiving content full of marketing tricks. My examples were a last night movie being disturbed countless times and a washing powder promising whiter shirt than it is now. Was I wrong?

Thank you.
Pavel

Thanks for this video . I like it so much and very helpful