(Video) How to include personal examples in your essay

6 Responses to (Video) How to include personal examples in your essay

1. ima says:

   12 September 2011 at 5:18 am

   was sooooooooo useful thak you.

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2. Marian says:

   12 September 2011 at 9:17 am

   This is a valuable lesson, thank you. Now, I begin to notice some mistakes that I used to write in my essays. I would like to watch some more videos, this one was a great help.

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3. Rama Grover says:

   13 September 2011 at 4:43 am

   You are a gem. Your lectures are of great help. I would like to know if you give personal classes to groups/individuals in Dubai? My writing is weak, i scored 6.5 in my last 2 attempts, this time i must get minimum 7 in writing in order to support my PR application for Australia.(my overall band was 8 but writing ditched me). My exam is on 24th Sept. Anyway you can help?

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   • Ryan says:

     13 September 2011 at 10:10 am

     Hi Rama,

     Thank you for your kind words. Actually, I am in Shanghai, not Dubai. For personal coaching, please see the Online Courses section of this website: http://ieltsielts.com/online-ielts-writing-course/.

     Good luck,
     Ryan

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4. Radmila says:

   15 October 2011 at 1:51 am

   Thank you very much Ryan. It was very helpful indeed! You are a great teacher!

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   • Ryan says:

     15 October 2011 at 8:32 am

     Thank you, Radmila.

     Ryan

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