You have 48 hours to choose words that complete this essay! Your responses will appear in my upcoming YouTube video!

This exercise is simple: fill in the 4 blanks with words that complete this essay.  In my original essay, I wrote 1 word per space.  You may write as many words as you need per space.  The goal here is not to match my original essay, it is to complete this essay in a logical and grammatically accurate manner.  Post your responses as a comment to this blog post.

Should children go to nursery school prior to their primary studies?  Share personal examples in your essay if applicable.

In most countries today, children attend some form of preschool before engaging their studies at primary school.  Although many feel this is an ideal arrangement, this essay will argue that a strong familial environment at home can replace the need for a child to attend nursery school.  This will be shown by analyzing how the skills needed for elementary studies can be taught at home and how having additional time with parents can help strengthen a child’s sense of __________.

For one, many of the skills a child develops in preschool can be taught by parents.  For example, when my nephew was 3, ‘sharing’ was one of the main topics the very young were expected to have __________ upon entry into primary school.  Despite not having attended preschool, my nephew finished his kindergarten years at the top of his class and was given a special award for his particularly strong sense of sharing.  This example makes it clear that nursery school attendance should not be assumed a precursor to success in elementary school.

In addition to this, preschool-aged children are forced to engage the world of academia before they have had a chance to properly __________ with their parents.  For instance, a study in the US recently revealed a link between preschool attendance and childhood feelings of abandonment.  As this report shows, a clear link appears to exist in many cases between nursery school students and subpar parental relations.  Thus, encouraging the very young to attend preschool studies may not be as positive a course of action as many think.

Following this look at how parents can both set an academic foundation and establish stronger relations with their children, the conclusion can be drawn that nursery schools do not need to be attended prior to primary studies.  It is hoped parents the world over recognize that education and childhood development extend __________ the classroom.

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29 Responses to You have 48 hours to choose words that complete this essay! Your responses will appear in my upcoming YouTube video!

  1. Denis says:

    1a child’s sense of curiosity
    2 to have obtained upon entry into primary school
    3 to properly communicate with their parents
    4 education and childhood development extend over the classroom

  2. ravshan says:

    1. Belonging/companionship
    2. Developed/Familiarized/Learnt
    3. Communicate/get along
    4. Beyond/Over

  3. samindra sinha says:

    In most countries today, children attend some form of preschool before engaging their studies at primary school. Although many feel this is an ideal arrangement, this essay will argue that a strong familial environment at home can replace the need for a child to attend nursery school. This will be shown by analyzing how the skills needed for elementary studies can be taught at home and how having additional time with parents can help strengthen a child’s sense of ___bonding_______.

    For one, many of the skills a child develops in preschool can be taught by parents. For example, when my nephew was 3, ‘sharing’ was one of the main topics the very young were expected to have shared upon entry into primary school. Despite not having attended preschool, my nephew finished his kindergarten years at the top of his class and was given a special award for his particularly strong sense of sharing. This example makes it clear that nursery school attendance should not be assumed a precursor to success in elementary school.

    In addition to this, preschool-aged children are forced to engage the world of academia before they have had a chance to properly _attached_______ with their parents. For instance, a study in the US recently revealed a link between preschool attendance and childhood feelings of abandonment. As this report shows, a clear link appears to exist in many cases between nursery school students and subpar parental relations. Thus, encouraging the very young to attend preschool studies may not be as positive a course of action as many think.

    Following this look at how parents can both set an academic foundation and establish stronger relations with their children, the conclusion can be drawn that nursery schools do not need to be attended prior to primary studies. It is hoped parents the world over recognize that education and childhood development extend _beyound_________ the classroom.

  4. Ruth says:

    1. learning in terms of social and academic skills
    2. been taught
    3. spend time
    4. beyond

  5. anna says:

    belonging, achieved, interact, beyond

  6. TOM says:

    affection,chance,time,over

  7. Henry says:

    confidence
    develop
    communicate
    beyond

  8. Henry says:

    Sorry for commenting again but I meant developed not develop.

  9. mii says:

    In most countries today, children attend some form of preschool before engaging their studies at primary school. Although many feel this is an ideal arrangement, this essay will argue that a strong familial environment at home can replace the need for a child to attend nursery school. This will be shown by analyzing how the skills needed for elementary studies can be taught at home and how having additional time with parents can help strengthen a child’s sense of __belongings________.

    For one, many of the skills a child develops in preschool can be taught by parents. For example, when my nephew was 3, ‘sharing’ was one of the main topics the very young were expected to have _____educate_____ upon entry into primary school. Despite not having attended preschool, my nephew finished his kindergarten years at the top of his class and was given a special award for his particularly strong sense of sharing. This example makes it clear that nursery school attendance should not be assumed a precursor to success in elementary school.

    In addition to this, preschool-aged children are forced to engage the world of academia before they have had a chance to properly ____staying______ with their parents. For instance, a study in the US recently revealed a link between preschool attendance and childhood feelings of abandonment. As this report shows, a clear link appears to exist in many cases between nursery school students and subpar parental relations. Thus, encouraging the very young to attend preschool studies may not be as positive a course of action as many think.

    Following this look at how parents can both set an academic foundation and establish stronger relations with their children, the conclusion can be drawn that nursery schools do not need to be attended prior to primary studies. It is hoped parents the world over recognize that education and childhood development extend ______over____ the classroom.

  10. abdullah says:

    empathy
    it
    be
    in

  11. joby george says:

    1- self esteem
    2- achieved/ demonstrted
    3-mingle/attach/interact
    4- beyond

  12. Samin says:

    security
    been developed
    enjoy the life
    ,had to start before

  13. erynn says:

    belonging
    learnt
    bond
    beyond

  14. Mr Bushra says:

    1/empathy.
    2/obtain.
    3/get on.
    4/beyond.

  15. kate says:

    1. educating
    2. acquired
    3. interact
    4. beyond

  16. Anderson says:

    1) Curiosity
    2) Developed
    3) Interact
    4) Beyond

  17. Tiara says:

    1. love and caring for others,
    2. learned,
    3. engaged,
    4. beyond

  18. Ei Ei says:

    security and belong
    acquainted
    interact
    beyond

  19. rnd says:

    1 being
    2 build
    3 bonded
    4 beyond

  20. solly says:

    1,family relationship and sharing 2,when they reach 3,engage /interact 4, beyond

  21. Bahga says:

    1/curiosity.
    2/developed.
    3/engaged.
    4/beyond.

  22. Vikram says:

    1.belonging
    2.Learnt
    3.Attach
    4.Beyond

  23. ziaul Huda says:

    1-Sence of humour/ learning skills.
    2- to have experiencd.
    3-mixed .
    4-in

  24. Abi says:

    Early school education is always being a heated and mostly discussed topic all over the world. Day by day lots of studies and development proving the fact that it is very much important to utilize this phase of child group effectively. However a group of people are in favor of early school classes, on the other hand it is refuted by many people. It is believed that nursery education is very important to increase the cognitive development for effective learning by improving the communication, physical, mental, language and mathematical skills development at a very beginning to achieve better result.
    Firstly, rapid developments in the field of education by introducing new learning methods have already proven the importance of early school foundation. These techniques not only enhance the physical growth but also improve the mental development of the child, which help understanding the languages quickly and communicate properly with peers in and out the facilities provided by the early learning management, ultimately it is developing the cognitive aspects of child. For instance in ‘Dubai’, UAE, Ministry of Education introduce different professional school settings to have trained professionals who are focused to practice with children’s different type of learning skills such as associative learning which help them recognized objects by understanding the visual objects. This example is explaining the importance of learning methods for child’s for initial education.

    Although kindergarten education is always consider being another form of playing games, but in today’s education world the importance to child being able to attend these studies is a must. It is very much critical to figure it out at early stages what are the areas which are considerable weak as compare to other. This can only be possible if one went through the nursery. Let’s take example of my son’s, one attended early schools while the other one did not. Being parent we can easily figure it out the level of confident in both of them when they socially interact with their peers, addition to this, one can easily figure it out the level of thinking when they are doing some art work by drawing and coloring OR calculate numbers. This real life example is proving the fact of attending initial phase education, thus showing why many people give importance to attend early schooling.

    At the end education sector is being developed rapidly so the researchers working in the same field are also coming up with logical definition, showing importance of cognitive development skills for young ones. Idea of attending the facilities of early school is very positive to improve communication, physical, mental skills from the beginning of their educational career. It is recommended to get the benefits of these early settings by making sure their standard and evaluating improvement in child quarterly.

  25. Zani Win says:

    improvement,experienced, attached,outside

  26. Zani Win says:

    improvement ,attached,experienced,outside

  27. Dr. Aziz-Ur-Rehman says:

    1- society, security and bonding
    2- gined /obtained/ learned/ attained
    3- live/spend time/ know / attach
    4-i strongly doubt the health of this sentence or may be i am unable to get it.
    However, the word completing the sense is given below.
    It is hoped parents the world over recognize that education and childhood development extend __________ the classroom.

    BEYOND.

  28. maaz says:

    learning
    taught
    live
    beyond

  29. sabita sanjel says:

    developmental milestones

    bond in a relation

    in their childhood

    not only in

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