You have 48 hours to put this essay’s sentences in order! Your responses will appear in my upcoming YouTube video!

This essay was written in response to the following essay question (seen in January in an unknown location):

More people are traveling today than ever before.  Why do you think this is?

Look at the following sentences.  As a comment to this blog post, please copy and paste these sentences into the right order.  I will be making a video about this exercise and will include images of your responses:

  1. Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.
  2. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
  3. Both will be examined in this essay.
  4. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
  5. In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
  6. Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
  7. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.
  8. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.
  9. To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
  10. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.
  11. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.
  12. On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
  13. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.
  14. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.

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16 Responses to You have 48 hours to put this essay’s sentences in order! Your responses will appear in my upcoming YouTube video!

  1. Marinella says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers. Both will be examined in this essay.
    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over. To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.
    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.
    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  2. Siva says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and
    tourism are thought to be the main triggers. Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector. For example, knowledge of raw
    resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over. To capitalize on this interest,
    many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the
    core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel. For instance,
    Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public
    signs in French, English and Mandarin. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence
    that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a
    surge in international travel numbers.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel. This is a trend that
    does not appear to be slowing at all. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  3. Noora says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel. Both will be examined in this essay.On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

  4. N .Mathew says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.Both will be examined in this essay.

    For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  5. Anderson Nascimento says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers. Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin. In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over. To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  6. Henry says:

    I’m not quite sure, there it goes.

    More people are traveling today than ever before. Why do you think this is?

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all. To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region. Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel. Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.

    It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  7. Anonymous says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
    Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.
    Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
    For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world
    over.
    To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
    Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to
    display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism
    numbers and international travel exists.
    This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.
    It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.
    It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

  8. lutfy says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.Both will be examined in this essay

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with business people in the African region.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hot spots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  9. wenjie mao says:

    for the introduction paragraph: 6 14 3; for first supporting para: 12 2 9 8; for second supporting para: 5 4 7 13; concluding para: 1 11 10. 😀

  10. enas says:

    6.Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
    11.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.
    14.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.
    3.Both will be examined in this essay.
    12.On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
    2.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
    9.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
    8.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.
    5.In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    4.For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    7.Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.
    13.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.
    1.Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.
    10.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  11. Servilho says:

    Ryan,

    Here is my answer. I hove it is correct.

    06. Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
    11. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.
    14. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.
    03. Both will be examined in this essay.

    12. On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
    02. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
    To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
    08. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    05. In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    04. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    07. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.
    13. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

    01. Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.
    10. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  12. archana says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers. Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  13. ziaul Huda says:

    6.Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.11.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.

    14.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.
    3.Both will be examined in this essay.
    12.On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
    2.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
    9.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.8.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.5.In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    4.For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.7.Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.

    13.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.
    1.Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.
    10.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  14. Muhammad says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers. Both will be examined in this essay.

    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
    To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
    Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.

    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  15. Denis says:

    1. Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.
    2. Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.
    3. This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.
    4. Both will be examined in this essay.

    5. On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.
    6. For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    7. Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.
    8. Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.

    9. In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.
    10. For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.
    11. To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.
    12. Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.

    13. It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.
    14. It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.

  16. maaz says:

    Today, the number of people engaging in international travel is swelling rapidly.Although many factors have contributed to this growth, trade opportunities and tourism are thought to be the main triggers.Both will be examined in this essay.
    On the one hand, the increasing international awareness of growth markets is spurring development in the travel sector.For example, knowledge of raw resources available in African countries has piqued the interest of manufacturing and consuming nations the world over.To capitalize on this interest, many are making expeditions to establish cross border connections with businesspeople in the African region.Thus, it is clear that trade is one of the core reasons international travel is growing.
    In addition to this, growing affluence the world over has made it possible for increasing amounts of people to engage in recreational travel.For instance, Chinese tourist numbers are growing so quickly that major holiday destinations, such as the Eiffel Tower in Paris, are choosing to display their public signs in French, English and Mandarin.
    Following this look, it is clear that global trade opportunities and tourism are altering humanity’s need for international travel.Thus, the unshrinking need for tourist hotspots to accommodate travelers from various countries is clear evidence that a true link between tourism numbers and international travel exists.This is a trend that does not appear to be slowing at all.It is thus expected that rates of travel will only continue to climb into the foreseeable future.It can therefore be concluded that growing worldwide affluence is fueling a surge in international travel numbers.

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